Wednesday, November 4, 2009

Haikus

Updated 3/2017-- all links (except to my own posts) removed as many no longer active. and it was easier than checking each one.

It seems I inspired T, Notes of an Anesthesioboist, recently to write a beautiful Haiku.   I was encouraged by Dr Rob, Musings of a Distractible Mind, who is holding a contest.   Hers and mine are based on our professions.  I’d like to encourage you all to do the same.  No contest, just a challenge similar to the Six Word Memoir.

Haiku #1
Vase broken, skin cut
Glue repairs grandma's treasures
Blue vase, baby's cheek

Haiku #2
Too big , too small, sad
Cut, sew, reduce, augment, lift
Happy, happy girls

4 comments:

Dr. Smak said...

I'm loving the happy girls. Brilliant.

Dreaming again said...

Love the happy girls, had to share it with my best friend who had one of the two surgeries mentioned (not the one I had ;o) )

warmsocks said...

Vase broken, skin cut
Glue repairs grandma's treasures
Blue vase, baby's cheek


Definitely the best of all the entries in Dr. Rob's contest. Well done!

rlbates said...

Thank you, warmsocks. There are some good entries in Dr Rob's contest.